not bad but i didnt get the point of the story...
Since you want reviews, lets write something constructive
So, the graphics were fine i thought, the only problem is that the animation was a bit static, sometimes it looked more like a comic than an animated cartoon but it could be a particular style.
The music fitted well with the story but u forgot to put credits at the end of your movie lol
hmmm... what else?
yeah talking about the story it was a bit short so i dint really get the point, but nevermind, im a girl so action movies arent my type lol
In conclusion, i think it was a good attempt but like i said, try to work a bit more on the animation and maybe on the cohesion of the story.
good luck !